Final version with fixes to Cathy's spreadsheet from Ken.

abstract.tex

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 \begin{abstract}
   We propose a three year plan to begin R\&D on module and sensor
   design for an upgrade to the CMS forward pixel detector in the far

phase-2_proposal.tex

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@@ -114,8 +114,9 @@ pixel disks on each side of the pixel barrel.  A problem with this
 approach is that momentum and impact parameter resolutions degrade in
 this far forward region due to geometry and tracks traveling more and
 more parallel to the solenoidal magnetic field.  This could be
-mitigated by increasing the pixel segmentation of the detector in this
-far forward region.  If (some of) the pixel layers provide timing information,
+addressed by increasing the pixel segmentation of the detector in this
+far forward region.  If (some of) the pixel layers provide timing
+information, and/or were tilted slightly to provide ``stereo layers,''
 this could also mitigate losses in longitudinal impact parameter
 resolution. This would all have to be done without greatly increasing the
 power, cooling and readout requirements.
@@ -195,23 +196,25 @@ construction and testing is calculated in exactly the same way, but
 for FY15 and FY16.  The test beam telescope could be considered
 capital equipment and therefore should not have any IDC; it is assumed
 to consist of \$8k in parts and \$2k for PMTs for triggering.  Labor
-for the telescope assembly will be done by the UNL electronics shop
-with an estimated total of 2 weeks FTE.  Travel to the test beam is
-not completely understood since it could occur as a trip from the US
-to Europe, or a trip to Fermilab, so an average between the two is
-used; four people are assumed to be traveling to the test beam.  The
-sensor mask will be made by Tilman Rohe and he has paid 10k euros for
-this in the past.  The 20 wafer test run is estimated by Tilman to
-cost 15k euros.  UNL and KU would each take one trip to PSI each year,
-whereas OSU would take two trips to PSI each year in order to get
-better integrated into the project, since they are relatively new
-collaborators with the Swiss groups.  Similarly, UNL will take two
-trips to FNAL each year, KU would take one and OSU take two.  OSU
-would be using the off-campus IDC rate for travel, whereas KU and UNL
-would have to use the on-campus rates since the there will be
-on-campus work done and their respective sponsored programs offices
-require one IDC rate to be used.  The USD to euro exchange rate is the
-average of the previous year to date.
+for the telescope assembly will be done either by the UNL or KU
+electronics shops with an estimated total of 2 weeks FTE.  For the
+purposes of estimating costs, we include the labor rates from UNL for
+the telescope assembly, but the KU numbers would be very similar.
+Travel to the test beam is not completely understood since it could
+occur as a trip from the US to Europe, or a trip to Fermilab, so an
+average between the two is used; four people are assumed to be
+traveling to the test beam.  The sensor mask will be made by Tilman
+Rohe and he has paid 10k euros for this in the past.  The 20 wafer
+test run is estimated by Tilman to cost 15k euros.  UNL and KU would
+each take one trip to PSI each year, whereas OSU would take two trips
+to PSI each year in order to get better integrated into the project,
+since they are relatively new collaborators with the Swiss groups.
+Similarly, UNL will take two trips to FNAL each year, KU would take
+one and OSU take two.  OSU would be using the off-campus IDC rate for
+travel, whereas KU and UNL would have to use the on-campus rates since
+the there will be on-campus work done and their respective sponsored
+programs offices require one IDC rate to be used.  The USD to euro
+exchange rate is the average of the previous year to date.
 
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